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On The Boat

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Huan Yi
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0 posted 04-21-2005 10:11 AM       View Profile for Huan Yi   Email Huan Yi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Huan Yi


Somewhere to go
Something to do . . .

If it wasnít you
Itíd be someone else . . .
Whatever is here at the hour

And another night
In a hackneyed act
That it really does matter with who . . .

Donít tell her so
That would be cruel

She likes to think
Each man a fool

© Copyright 2005 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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1 posted 04-21-2005 10:23 AM       View Profile for LeeJ   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LeeJ

perhaps she's had the unfortunate experience, of only knowing fools?

Great poem

JamesMichael
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2 posted 04-21-2005 05:42 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Enjoyed...James
yv
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3 posted 04-21-2005 05:44 PM       View Profile for yv   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for yv

Each man a fool
In his awkward paradise of
Silence and everlasting
Glances from
Illustrious bottom
To
Well-dipping top

I tried my hand at the "fill in the blank" approach to your genius.  Again...loved this write.


Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent.
passing shadows
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4 posted 04-21-2005 09:26 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

nicely done
Drauntz
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5 posted 04-30-2007 07:36 PM       View Profile for Drauntz   Email Drauntz   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Drauntz

I guess that she is right? right?


enjoyed.
 
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