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stevebrklynnyc
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since 2004-01-04
Posts 292
GA, Camden

0 posted 2005-04-21 09:18 AM



Woking for the sane
I still love her
How can I let her know

It's too long
It's not too late
Burning all too long
I have felt the heat

It's just another
Look at us
It was real 12 years ago
It's the same now

I work everday
So do you
Help me overcome
I will be there

A second chance
Life is all but
a second chace
I love you

© Copyright 2005 Stephen Capp - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-04-21 09:51 AM


powerfully written and felt, although, saying this only from my own experience, once trust is broken, you can never return, or at least, I can't.  Its not about forgiveness, it's simply about, not wanting to be second best...

Hugs to you, and warm wishes for renewal with her

DavePage
Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917

2 posted 2005-04-22 04:28 PM


Raw words but talent

Dave

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