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Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665


0 posted 2005-04-21 04:20 AM


Returning from the
flip side of
a storm, sickly
blossom, spitting wind,
whistling a refrain.
Tree's passing slowly
outside train windows,
black crows standing
in puddles, casting
reflections in the
murk. Parting  the
clouds of my
mind, settling softness
moving within me.
Wrapping night reflections
into my heart.

Justice cannot be for oneside alone, but must be for both. (Eleanor Roosevelt)

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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

1 posted 2005-04-21 10:13 AM


That last line is perfect Phil.  Very sweet write.

I really want to care,
I want to feel something,
let me dig a little deeper
nah, still nothing~
my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee

LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2005-04-21 10:24 AM


beautifiully written and felt
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