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Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2005-04-21 02:09 AM


I own you.
Today you
are mine.
I missed you,
you know?
I
want to be your   blood.
         I am your flesh.

What happened
to us?

Is it so wrong
to understand

priorities
and lists..



you answer my questions
with questions apparently

you are jesus...


all
the
more
reason


to hate you...
you've made it
to where I can't breathe...

nor sleep,
eat
talk
wish or hope...

begone with your
angels...

I miss being one myself...

and I hope one day to surrender.

[This message has been edited by Kaoru (04-21-2005 10:10 AM).]

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Soulfisher
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1 posted 2005-04-21 02:30 AM


Sounds to me you are still quite the angel.
LeeJ
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2 posted 2005-04-21 09:09 AM


yes, adding, and it makes perfect sense...


Susan Caldwell
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3 posted 2005-04-21 09:17 AM


"you've made it
to where I can't breath..."

yes.  understood.  


"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Aenimal
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4 posted 2005-04-21 10:01 AM


you answer my questions
with questions apparently


uh huh. made perfect sense to me but then i'm kinda of on another plane at the moment

Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
5 posted 2005-04-21 10:09 AM


Aren't you always, Raph?
serenity blaze
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6 posted 2005-04-21 10:27 AM


The only thing I'm finding confusing is what there is to NOT understand.

You express why angels fall and why men/women aspire to wing...

smile

this is the middle ground m'lovie

the mandorla

and it ain't no place to be for long

and yet

it's what we aspire to. from sky and ground

Aenimal
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7 posted 2005-04-21 10:44 AM


true lol
Cloud 9
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8 posted 2005-04-21 12:56 PM


This DOES make sense. Love it.
inkedgoddess
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9 posted 2005-04-22 07:41 AM


makes perfect sense and no sense
like my world......i prefer flight

Ericc
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10 posted 2005-04-23 04:01 PM


Awesome.

Eric

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11 posted 2005-04-23 05:25 PM


believe it or not, I understand and relate very well

hugs Meg

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