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JoshG
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since 2004-11-16
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TX, USA

0 posted 2005-04-20 05:29 PM


Love in the kindness of a compliment
Love in the pain of separation from a lover
Love in divisions of souls
Love in the hate you hold of a best friend
Love in the together promised in tomorrow
Love in you
Love in me
Love in the life taken
Love in the death given
Love to love when there is nothing left
Love to give when giving is painful
Love to receive when undeserving
Love is the glue that binds us
Love is scissors that cut us apart
Love out of pure truth



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Cloud 9
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since 2004-11-05
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Ca
1 posted 2005-04-20 06:02 PM


Beeeeuuuuuuteeeefull!

"Love to love when there is nothing left
Love to give when giving is painful"

I love this part the most. I can honestly say that I can walk away from my marriage because I gave it all I could.

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2005-04-20 07:50 PM


Enjoyed your thoughts on love...James
passing shadows
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3 posted 2005-04-20 08:42 PM


exactly
JoshG
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since 2004-11-16
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TX, USA
4 posted 2005-04-21 10:12 AM


C 9 - While I can't share your exact situational sentiments.  You hit on the core of where I was when I wrote this piece.  How it feels until nothing is left, but somehow you can still feel good about it because you loved unconditionally though to the end.  Thanks for the read!

JM - Thanks for your eyes and thoughts!

PS - Thanks for stopping by!

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