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Once Upon a Time

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Huan Yi
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Waukegan


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Suddenly
On the slopes
Of shallow ditches

Yellow flowers
Remember Spring
© Copyright 2005 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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displaced


1 posted 04-20-2005 11:04 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

and a love that once was new
LeeJ
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SE PA


2 posted 04-20-2005 11:10 AM       View Profile for LeeJ   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LeeJ

Beautiful..bittersweet....
ice
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3 posted 04-20-2005 09:15 PM       View Profile for ice   Email ice   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ice

In Pennsylvania, this time of the year, the "Yellow Flowers", are Colts foot.

A visual poem, I can see the flowers in my mind, and also smell the musk scent that rises from spring ditches...

----------ice
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WindWalker
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4 posted 04-21-2005 10:51 AM       View Profile for WindWalker   Email WindWalker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for WindWalker

Yes, this is Beautiful and bittersweet! I like it!
yv
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5 posted 04-21-2005 05:33 PM       View Profile for yv   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for yv

Beautiful.  I must say you lead my imagination to different hights each time I read your work.

Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent.

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines


6 posted 04-21-2005 06:57 PM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

I understand~~~

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just out of reach


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Mmmm...yes.  Chris
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short beautiful poems.

Suddenly
On the slopes-------down
Of shallow ditches--down

Yellow flowers---up
Remember Spring--spirit up
 
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