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Open Poetry #35

Once Upon a Time

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2005-04-20 10:55 AM

Suddenly
On the slopes
Of shallow ditches

Yellow flowers
Remember Spring

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2005-04-20 11:04 AM

and a love that once was new

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2005-04-20 11:10 AM

Beautiful..bittersweet....

ice
Member Elite

since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

3 posted 2005-04-20 09:15 PM

In Pennsylvania, this time of the year, the "Yellow Flowers", are Colts foot.

A visual poem, I can see the flowers in my mind, and also smell the musk scent that rises from spring ditches...

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WindWalker
Senior Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 1218

4 posted 2005-04-21 10:51 AM

Yes, this is Beautiful and bittersweet! I like it!

yv
Senior Member

since 2003-05-30

Posts 574

5 posted 2005-04-21 05:33 PM

Beautiful. I must say you lead my imagination to different hights each time I read your work.

Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2005-04-21 06:57 PM

I understand~~~

M

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

7 posted 2005-04-21 09:42 PM

Mmmm...yes. Chris

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

8 posted 2007-04-30 07:26 PM

short beautiful poems.

Suddenly
On the slopes-------down
Of shallow ditches--down

Yellow flowers---up
Remember Spring--spirit up

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