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LeeJ
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0 posted 2005-04-20 07:36 AM



And the room feels greater then any human being
Time disappears to a contented space
Lungs breathe & trace an ageless language
Paralyzed trembles clairvoyant
Like a finite center of poignant
Supremacy of helplessness
Undeniable flood, breaching all limits

It is there I whisper…

Teach my fingers to beat beneath you skin
Reading signs and wonders
Invisible, falling aloft beneath you
Filling the abandonment of centre
Scratching nails on seer reality
Flight of metaphors…psychic speechlessness

Equally in eternal presence
Nature’s melody speaks soft reverence
Learning to embrace heights of floating octaves
With no promises other then to love and be loved

Delusional infancy, grasping confidence
Cluster evolution’s wings of shaman
Born unto the thoughts of man
Pastels speaking mysteries of Koran
A stronger sense of well being
Three dimensional glows fit our nearness

Fulfilling mystery’s unconsciousness
A lost truth
Delights in knowing the unknown
Somersaulting deeply into the core
An uncontrolled control
Uplifting spheres of adeptness, unsure

Preserving spirituality of tones
Teach me your illuminated rarity
Dance with our senses into imagination
Thus, motivates the design

In this space of discourse, this charismatic transition
Love then, are the two voices confessing intimacy
Growing toward fanning flames
Interacting insights and thoughts
Heirs of spiritual promise
There I know you, feel your exhilarations
Your fears…your needs

There....
I know you, then, because you are me...and I you
For a moment we are each, our narcissistic self
A spiritual pilgrimage sharing our selves


© Copyright 2005 Lee J. - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2005-04-20 08:01 AM


LeeJ
All within a birthday suit. LOL enjoyed
Good morning sweet.

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2005-04-20 10:04 AM


Lee, that title is just perfect!

I thoroughly enjoyed ~ understood and agreed with ~ your poem! When the spirits are connected, the joining of the physical bodies is absolutely sublime!


Linda

HopeS
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3 posted 2005-04-20 10:17 AM


Lee this was truly embossed with shine....
Dance with our senses into imagination
Thus, motivates the design


Hope

Margherita
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Eternity
4 posted 2005-04-20 01:24 PM


Equally in eternal presence
Nature’s melody speaks soft reverence
Learning to embrace heights of floating octaves
With no promises other then to love and be loved



Every line could stand on its own and still be refined poetry ...

Such talent!

Love, Margherita

Ericc
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5 posted 2005-04-20 02:26 PM


Beautiful!

Eric

passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2005-04-20 09:13 PM


I can't write like this, I know I can't so I don't even try...

so many thoughts, so many lines that just sink into the mind



ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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7 posted 2005-04-20 11:20 PM


"And the room feels greater then any human being
Time disappears to a contented space
Lungs breathe & trace an ageless language
Paralyzed trembles clairvoyant
Like a finite center of poignant
Supremacy of helplessness
Undeniable flood, breaching all limits"...

Right here, perfection
The entire work was captivating...and this sat as a crown.

TD

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where the wild flowers grow
8 posted 2005-04-21 02:00 AM


Always perfection, Lee...
MGROVES
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9 posted 2005-04-21 02:24 AM


your mind and thoughts and the way you write it totally amazes me~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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