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~K~
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0 posted 2005-04-20 06:40 AM



there is no moment
stolen
that goes unnoticed

free will is a series
of predictable choices

Enough,
she said
of falling stars

all my wishes
have been granted

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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2005-04-20 08:14 AM


~K~
Lovely.

LeeJ
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2 posted 2005-04-20 08:26 AM


Well done!
Dark Angel
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3 posted 2005-04-20 09:00 AM


Enough,
she said
of falling stars

all my wishes
have been granted


wish i could say the same....

intriguing this, and you

we've you been? talk to me.

m

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Michael Hutchence (INXS)

Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
4 posted 2005-04-20 08:47 PM


excellent
passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2005-04-20 08:50 PM


well done
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with you
6 posted 2005-04-20 09:18 PM


oh I like this very much!
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where the wild flowers grow
7 posted 2005-04-21 02:01 AM


awesome.
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8 posted 2005-04-25 01:00 PM


if all her wishes have been granted...then that carrot wouldnt still be dangling there..now would it?
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