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exhale
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since 2003-06-13
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Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2005-04-19 01:17 AM


i'm tired of romance
and i'm tired of love songs
i'll hold your hand
if you promise i can break your fingers
because this isn't a love song
and it won't ever be.

you want to lie in bed with someone
and pretend that's all that matters
you were always the best love song
because you were fake
and i was fake
which makes for a damn good song.

SN:someone said the wrong
thing to me today

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Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2005-04-19 01:42 AM


I believe you! I believe you! ~ It isn't a love song! lol

"i'll hold your hand
if you promise i can break your fingers"

~ I had to laugh at the above! I wasn't expect that!

Remember, tomorrow is another day! May it be a better one than the one you had today!


EA


MGROVES
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since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802
california
2 posted 2005-04-19 04:46 AM


good line
hold hands and braking fingers
i have felt like that many a time.

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2005-04-19 05:10 AM


cool write...let him have it!
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