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Foxyoasis
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0 posted 2005-04-18 11:46 PM



My heart has wings and I feel as If
I could fly around you

For you are the air that keeps me up
the sugar in my coffee my dear!

The cream in the middle of my oreo cookie

with you life is alot better with you beside me
I wake up each day with a grin on my face and think
how lucky I am

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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MGROVES
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1 posted 2005-04-18 11:49 PM




       nice to see that
     feels good

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Foxyoasis
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2 posted 2005-04-18 11:51 PM


*big smiles*

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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3 posted 2005-04-27 07:50 AM


I love this!! It seems to be
writtened from the heart.
Hugs,
Ethel

Foxyoasis
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4 posted 2005-04-27 12:42 PM


thank you maybe one day ill show him these

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


JamesMichael
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5 posted 2005-04-28 07:51 PM


No finer day than today, to show him...James
jwesley
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6 posted 2005-04-28 08:23 PM


Don't know if I've ever been the 'cream in an oriole cookie'...talk about the cat's meow!

Kool..

j.

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7 posted 2005-04-28 11:01 PM


Lovely. Much enjoyed. Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

Foxyoasis
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8 posted 2005-04-29 12:01 PM


thank's guys hehe i did show him the blue rose solider poem. and it was hard enough to read that without tears streaming down my face lol

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


HopeS
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9 posted 2005-04-29 01:51 AM


These are wonderful feelings you expressed

Hope

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10 posted 2005-04-29 05:24 AM


good write
vandana
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11 posted 2005-04-29 10:15 AM


good read
Foxyoasis
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12 posted 2005-04-29 04:58 PM


thank's everyone

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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