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Beenie
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0 posted 2005-04-18 09:46 PM


Wish


If I could have one wish,
just one to have come true.
The only thing that I would wish,
is for me to be with you.

The days by your side.

The nights in your arms.

My dreams consumed with you.

The only one to have my heart,
My one,
My only,
You.

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with you
1 posted 2005-04-18 09:48 PM


awwwww...this is sooo sweet!!
ThisDiamond
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2 posted 2005-04-18 09:55 PM


Simple in the volumes said.
TD

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3 posted 2005-04-18 10:03 PM


Love this!!!!!!!

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

MGROVES
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4 posted 2005-04-19 12:19 PM


short simple and oh sooo sweet~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

passing shadows
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5 posted 2005-04-19 05:19 AM


precious

hope you will write more

Beenie
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6 posted 2005-04-19 03:11 PM


Thank you all for the kind words. I was not going to post that one, I feel it to be a bit inferior. It was the first that I have done in about 5-6 years, and it shows. Hopefully I can come up with better. I posted another in DP4 also....

Beenie

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