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Softly Whimpered Sigh
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Softly Whimpered Sigh |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Softly Whimpered Sigh ~*Marge Tindal*~ I managed to hold back the spilling of tears from the eye But, try as I might, I could not contain one softly whimpered sigh~ With shoulders squared against the night he felt the touch of that sigh turned back and held me gently said, "Go ahead, love, just cry."~ In the strongest arms I’ve ever known he held me ever-tender Until, to the searing tears, I finally surrendered~ Ever so gently, he said, "I do not want to leave you The choice is not mine for the making I would give all that I have to give if it did not have to be but I have no control over what is to come no control over the enemies fighting inside of me"~ "When the night breeze brushes your shoulders bared to the moonlight know that I will send my Spirit to quilt you through the night"~ "After a time, my love, you will find another to take my place Though you may not recognize me know that it will be me with another earthly face"~ "The Spirit circles … comes ’round again Back to the safe harbor of love it has known for this heart has loved you too completely to ever leave you totally alone"~ *In his leaving … he left more than he took* ~Then true to his word … the Spirit of him has circled back~ April 18th of always (Yes, old love, the date still has a tender significance) ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, the spirit rejoices over what it has left. - Sufi epigram <))>< Email noles1@totcon.com |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
oh Marge...this is so so soooo tender and so full of love...  and love to you |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
You bring truth to the word sweetheart. TD |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
So beautiful..so gently whispered. Lovely Marge...lovely. Heart Hugs. For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: Some dates live on in our minds and hearts forever! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge/sis Where is the kleenex alert? Sniff ...and a hug for this lovely poem of heart. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
beautiful~ from a loving soul with an eternal love thats for an eternity~  My spirit will rise |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Marge, we all need a good cry now and then lovely piece |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Oh Marge, I can't begin to tell you the emotions I'm feeling right now. I felt like I was reading about my own life. I'm just so deeply moved. I'm not even trying to hold back the tears. I really don't know what else to say. Something has happened on the inside of me that I can't explain. Something that needed to happen. I feel as though somehow a deep pain that I have carried for the last 3 years has eased upon reading this beautiful piece. Thank you my friend. Love & tight hugs as I weep upon your loving shoulder, Jules |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
words can not describe how beautiful this is Marge, but through them we see into the beautiful soul of you. Hugs. Brava Lady, brava! I really want to care, |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is such a tender, loving write Marge. Beautiful! |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Marge You have a way with your words that tug at the heartstrings and brings a tear to the eye. Love BonBon  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
*sigh* ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ Italian Proverb Email - noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (01-14-2006 04:36 PM).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Just another *sigh* of sweet remember~  ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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