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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2005-04-18 04:44 AM


Beam light to
me, a light
of devine power.
Concentrate golden radience,
my body temple
awaits to be
washed with waves
of pulsing energy,
invigorating my core,
pouring beauteous saturation,
energising me, against
the tiresome rigours
of this world.

Justice cannot be for oneside alone, but must be for both. (Eleanor Roosevelt)

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ice
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Pennsylvania
1 posted 2005-04-18 05:05 AM


Very nice....

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passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2005-04-18 08:16 AM


just what I needed
LeeJ
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3 posted 2005-04-18 08:23 AM


well done
Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2005-04-18 02:04 PM


"energising me, against
the tiresome rigours
of this world."


exactly!  well done GR.

I really want to care,
I want to feel something,
let me dig a little deeper
nah, still nothing~
my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee

WindWalker
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5 posted 2005-04-18 04:58 PM


I love the imagery in this well crafted poem!
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california
6 posted 2005-04-19 05:04 AM




  oh yes

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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