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Italy Angel
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0 posted 2005-04-17 11:44 PM



In winter I lie beside hills
of banked poetry, making angels,
still and cold.
The upsurge of sensual verse
and an endless love
follow me from Sausalito
to the San Francisco bay.

Everywhere I go,
I am the city's lover.
I celebrate and rush towards
her shores with an awkward motion,
each gust
an unspoken longing,
lingering,
a stirring within.

The seasons begin to blur
and carry with them the scent
of Sonoma wine
that circles high above
the skyline.

I remain alive in the city,
the sound of the ocean at dawn
captures me---
with the softness of a tear
that idles beneath my lid.

And I will write each chapter
of my life beside her
as grapes bend over
the mountains,
fading into a falling sun.




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1 posted 2005-04-17 11:49 PM


" remain alive in the city,the sound of the ocean at dawn captures me---with the softness of a tear that idles beneath my lid.And I will write each chapter of my life beside heras grapes bend overthe mountains, fading into a falling sun."

I loved this....
know the area and smiled at the "The seasons begin to blur and carry with them the scent of Sonoma wine"

Welcome to Pip,even though you've been a member for a while...glad you finally decided to post!

Italy Angel
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2 posted 2005-04-18 02:02 AM


Grazie! I actually forgot. Thank you for your lovely comments.
Earth Angel
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3 posted 2005-04-18 02:14 AM



IA, that was a fine piece of writing you graced us with! ~ Rich in imagery that touched the senses.

I enjoyed your unique and highly poetic turns of phrase. i.e. "with the softness of a tear that idles beneath my lid."

Love & Light,
EA

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4 posted 2005-04-18 02:38 AM




living in ca myself  i know
   exactly what you talk about
      i use to live in santa cruz
   down by the lighthouse, many trips
    up the coast, love the ocean
        miss the sounds, the feel
          and the smell. thanks for a visual and memory  and a welcome to pip
       you shall love it here.  many
          hearts of gold
             with a lotta soul

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

freewheelin
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5 posted 2005-04-18 06:33 AM


"And I will write each chapter
of my life beside her
as grapes bend over
the mountains,
fading into a falling sun."

words of fine poetry. truly an excellent write.

passing shadows
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6 posted 2005-04-18 07:39 AM


so vivid and descriptive! wonderful first post!
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7 posted 2005-04-18 08:14 AM


I am the city's lover. I celebrate and rush towards her shores with an awkward motion, each gustan unspoken longing, lingering, a stirring within. The seasons begin to blur

Loved this, and so enjoyed the entire poem, but these words, ahhhh, such spirituality!

Dark Angel
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8 posted 2005-04-18 08:15 AM


Buonissimo! Magnifico!

Benvenuto a passions.  

this is a

"we all have wings, but some of us don't know why"

Michael Hutchence (INXS)

Aenimal
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9 posted 2005-04-18 08:28 AM


now that is an entrance, welcome to the blue.
looking forward to more

sicily devil

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10 posted 2005-04-18 08:52 AM


Excellent write..and welcome!!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

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11 posted 2005-04-18 08:59 AM


Cherilyn~
Welcome to Passions~

Enjoyed the nostalgia wrapped up neatly in this flow of poetic thoughts~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

Susan Caldwell
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12 posted 2005-04-18 11:20 AM


very lovely!

Lived in that area for a couple of years and it is the most beautiful place I have ever been.  

You did it justice.

and welcome!!!

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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13 posted 2005-04-18 01:06 PM


Wine tasting in Napa and a stroll through Pier 39 (when its not so crowded....lol) to watch the seals and eat crab.

O.k. that it.....I am going this weekend.

You wrote this very well

Italy Angel
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14 posted 2005-04-18 01:14 PM


Thank you to each and every one of you. Yes, that sounds good! How about clam chowder in a sourdough bowl? OR chili in a sourdough bowl? Mmmmmmmmmm....haha! You guys are all very sweet.

I have photos here:
http://public.fotki.com/CherilynFerroggiaro/

adagio
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15 posted 2005-04-18 01:41 PM


A wonderfoll piece! "The sound of the ocean at dawn captures me" This work has captured me.


        adagio


Cloud 9
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16 posted 2005-04-18 02:04 PM


Yes, shall we not forget the clam chowder in a sourdough bowl. those pics are beautiful.
Italy Angel
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17 posted 2005-04-18 02:23 PM


Grazie! I'll be back later to read more. My board's server is having problems and I am at my wits end. Hugs!
Earth Angel
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18 posted 2005-04-18 02:24 PM


IA, I checked out your photo albums and you have quite the photographic eye! I was especially impressed with the sky shots! You have a lot of grist there for your poetic mill!


EA

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19 posted 2005-04-18 04:13 PM



welcome 2 Passion!!!!!!


Bernie

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Martie
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20 posted 2005-04-18 04:15 PM


IA

A wonderful first post...took me back to the years when I lived in San Francisco.  It is a magical place to live, and inspired some poetry from me also.  Welcome to Pip!

soul drifter
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21 posted 2005-04-18 07:06 PM


Extraordinarily beautiful...glad to see I'm not the only under San Francisco's spell. Keeping this...
Welcome. I very much look forward to reading more of your work.

"Poets are all who love, who feel great truths, and tell them; and the truth of truths is love." --Philip James Bailey

BluesSerenade
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22 posted 2005-04-18 07:11 PM


Wonderful first post, Italy Angel~

Welcome, welcome!

JamesMichael
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23 posted 2005-04-18 07:52 PM


A beautiful flow of words...James
Aenimal
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24 posted 2005-04-18 09:12 PM


went through some of your photos, absolutely fantastic work. you have an amazing eye

welcome again to the blue

Italy Angel
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25 posted 2005-04-19 07:59 PM


Earth Angel-Thank you. I have a deep love for photography!

bslicker-Grazie!

Martie- Grazie. Yes, its very inspirational!

soul drifter-Grazie! Yes, a spell it is!

BluesSerenade-Grazie, I appreciate it.

JamesMichae-Grazie!

Aenimal-Grazie! Love your name. (reminds me of a favorite tool song)

Aenimal
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26 posted 2005-04-20 11:18 PM


well that's only because i named myself after the song/album. bloody hell, yet another tool fan on pip
Soulfisher
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27 posted 2005-04-21 02:14 AM


Welcome to pips Italy Angel and what a wonderful spill of words you have given us in your first post.

Though it has never stepped past fear
would you still accept my heart
knowing that it is all I have to give.

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