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Foxyoasis
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0 posted 2005-04-17 11:00 PM




Judgement I made to quickly
how swiftly you came to my
side and mended my bloody heart

I'm sorry bandaid makes the
misery go away. the look
in your eyes shows through
and through

I forgive you my Blue Solider
of love.

At least in this place and time
a man finally realize how foolish
he was and came to my side
before the tide came in on my heart
for the last time.

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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1 posted 2005-04-17 11:05 PM


are you doing better now? I sure hope so...
Foxyoasis
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2 posted 2005-04-17 11:13 PM


yea I am he came over friday and I wanted to show him a poem i written for him the blue rose solider but he told me he came over to say he was sorry for all the stuff and how he was foolish.  not just to hear the poem. he felt so bad about everything. I could not stay mad any longer how can I with someone I'm falling in love with .

SO we ended up spending the weekend together

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3 posted 2005-04-17 11:38 PM


good!! I'm glad you are working it out, and it's wonderful that he came over to say he was sorry. I'm happy for you
Foxyoasis
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4 posted 2005-04-17 11:46 PM


thank you

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


JamesMichael
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5 posted 2005-04-19 12:34 PM


Nice writing...nothing wrong with forgiveness...if thats the way you want to go...James
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6 posted 2005-04-19 12:43 PM


happy  for you. it is not easy for a man
to say he is sorry.  but for some when it is easy, ever notice that actions dont go with it

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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7 posted 2005-04-19 05:15 AM


nice
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