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DavePage
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0 posted 2005-04-17 06:22 PM





Rachel had always raised her head when no-one was looking
She dreamed of a life without stalking
Head always down backside tucked in
Head cut short
Crawl don’t begin
Rachel dreamed of wheat loaf forming a house for herself
Minute in her size fitting into her house
Next door neighbour probably a mouse
Who snuffle whiskers around her windows
Tadpole always wanted too much
And sticky
Was his touch

Her own door bright red
And soft
Her own bed
Of clean
Where her dream
Would seek other dreams
But Rachel never will be seen
For she exists in our own dreams

Of whatever sex or creed
Race or dominance
Of belief
She will just be a dream

Calling to wisdom

Sight unseen


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1 posted 2005-04-17 06:28 PM




wow!  really liked the way
      this was written and the
        thoughts it expressed~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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2 posted 2005-04-17 06:40 PM


Thanks Marsha

Dave

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