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Huan Yi
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My father died in bed
Calling for his Bellerophon

How much
He wanted to ride his horse
Into one last battle

I remember the tears he shed
To find himself unable

See the smoke
How it rises from the cave

It’s time to go

Say goodbye to all my friends—
Tell them I was happy
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1 posted 04-17-2005 03:09 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

you paint a picture very well....
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Like it

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Yet again...touching.  This is truly heartfelt and lovely...I must say you have a knack for simplistic creativity.

Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent.

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"I must say you have a knack for simplistic creativity."

?

This may be like the time a woman
on my staff told me how as a child
she and her friends after purchase
were disappointed to find
that their Ken dolls had no gentiles.

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