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Open Poetry #35

Sip this

DonFurr
Member

since 2001-01-01

Posts 172
Monticello IN

0 posted 2005-04-16 09:16 PM

If you do the same thing
time after time and the
results never change
are you searching
for a salvation
or stagnation
Break
that
mold
veer
your
path
drink
the fresh
water of new ideas

Bind me sole and Soul to the One
Together to pour Love into the world
until tears of joy fall like rain

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

1 posted 2005-04-16 09:21 PM

Yes

dave

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2005-04-16 09:44 PM

This is OUTSTANDING!
TD

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2005-04-16 09:51 PM

most definitely

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2005-04-16 09:58 PM

very well presented!

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

5 posted 2005-04-17 02:37 PM

"drink
the fresh
water of ideas"

or know death.

...a full bodied message
expertly served.

K

yv
Senior Member

since 2003-05-30

Posts 574

6 posted 2005-04-17 03:49 PM

GORGEOUS!! That was absolutely genious I must say. I loved this write. You are quite literally a visionary of poetry. I am sublimely impressed! Congratulations!!

Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent.

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

7 posted 2005-04-17 05:44 PM

wow very impressed

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Italy Angel
Member

since 2003-09-01

Posts 65
Northern Ca

8 posted 2005-04-17 11:54 PM

Great form! I never could achieve that! Nice message as well.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

9 posted 2005-04-18 10:54 PM

I really enjoyed the beautiful presentation of this message!

DonFurr
Member

since 2001-01-01

Posts 172
Monticello IN

10 posted 2005-05-23 11:43 AM

Glad you all enjoyed it!!

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