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EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...

0 posted 2005-04-16 05:38 AM


Transference

Resurrected into the first facet
Somewhat sharper than the last
Given to wonder at the prospect
Of transference from the past

Discharged from veracity
Beyond a life of sullied blue
Open now only to wonder
Of an existence vaguely askew

Perceived the essence of the spectre
A fleeting glimpse of lessons taught
Whilst expansion ebbs the flow
And seizes on the final thought


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nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2005-04-16 08:20 AM


lots of lessons to be taught...and learned

much flowing of final thoughts~~ and those beginning ones too

M


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2 posted 2005-04-16 09:16 AM


Very very nicely written Eddie..
Much enjoyed the read.
Hugs~Nancy

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

passing shadows
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3 posted 2005-04-16 09:18 AM


good to read you again Eddie
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with you
4 posted 2005-04-16 04:24 PM


enjoyed this for sure
EagleOne
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5 posted 2005-04-17 05:26 AM


M ~ I like to think that there is a new beginning following each ending, and that we carry some of the lessons learned with us. Thank you for adding your thoughts!

Nancy ~ Thanks, always a pleasure to have you stop by!

passing shadows ~ Its good to be read by you my friend, take care!

Sea ~ Its good to know you enjoyed!

"A spring shower was cause to run
Until you twirled me in the rain" ~ BDC

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