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SEA 
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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 there are times when I find myself outlining with my lips in whispering on slow exhale of quivered breath with eyes closed as if in prayer softest sound, almost unheard as it screams through my soul and redefines ache I swear I swear it... You hear me no matter the distance.... I know You hear me when the sighing of your name emanates from the very essence of all that I am.... just.....listen ~SEA~ |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
there was an ache to this that i liked. enjoyed.  |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Stunning.... |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Exquisite! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW!!! OMG!!! You know IWIHWT!! Sooo beautiful with such an ache and longing. This is a keeper for my ~SEA~ file. Exquisite indeed! Hugs~Nancy For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow Susan awesome write here |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
like this one enjoyed bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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TexUS Member
since 2003-03-20
Posts 228 |
A beautiful write of a genuine spiritual connection. Truly enjoyed! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
You're good Sea...very nice...James |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
Beatufiul. I can feel the wanting (or wonting, as you wish) in this poem. It yearns and aches for and with desire. I love it and live it completely. Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
You always could write wonderful poetry. And, I always enjoyed reading each one. Thank you! |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you all so much for reading and your wonderful replies!! |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
..beautiful...this really speaks to me today.  |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
beauty filled with such passion~ My spirit will rise |
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Aleta Member
since 2005-04-17
Posts 102Louisiana |
A painful yearning suffers this poem born of hope that will not burn out. Enjoyed this poem. |
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The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
honest and powerful, enjoyed this very much The Mongrel cat came home, Holding half a head proceeded to show it off to all his new found friends |
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Italy Angel Member
since 2003-09-01
Posts 65Northern Ca |
'when the sighing of your name emanates from the very essence of all that I am....' Brava. This is indeed stunning. The closing was deeply felt. Cher |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you for reading, it means a lot to me |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
there are times when I find myself outlining with my lips in whispering on slow exhale of quivered breath with eyes closed as if in prayer ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ oh Im listening ... now you listen ... ... ... (do ya hear me saying IWIHWT)  |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
***sigh*** Knowing this well.... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A beautiful marriage of painting and poignant poetry. ~ A delicate, sigh-eliciting piece of writing... He may not hear with his ears, but hopefully he hears with his heart.  EA |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Oh, how I love to listen... If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
soft and lovely - fragile - well done-  SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Good grief you are such a romantic aren't you, and good thing too as it is just a treat to read your heart Sea. ((hugsatca)) |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
"sigh" Beautiful penned Susan, into my library (((hugs)) Charisma |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
This is a work of art Brian Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Oh SEA...how beautiful. The ache is tangible. And oh my goodness I feel this one... "Time has told me not to ask for more, one day our ocean will find its shore" ~Nick Drake |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh girl.... break me why dontcha. dayem Mxx "we all have wings, but some of us don't know why" |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
I swear I swear it... You hear me no matter the distance.... "I know You hear me when the sighing of your name emanates from the very essence of all that I am.... just.....listen" I hear your slient call and I reply, I am here.. Lovely words you crafted today. best marty |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Revisit...James |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Exhales just like a whisper... soft! ~tier |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
it's a little late, but wanted to say (((thank you))) so much for the replies...you guys are awesome! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Super! Eric IF YOU HAVE TO JUDGE SOMEONE DO IT ON THE SIDE OF MERCY AND LET TIME SEASON THE RESULTS. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Sea this hits close today....sigh....  I keep a fragrance bottle my |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
again, a question of spirituality? Possibly a loved one . . . Beautiful, Susan |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
*sigh* Absolutely beautiful...filled with gentle sensuality...*big hugs* |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
 Wow! I liked that!!!  Regret not that which you have done, |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Lovely writing Sea! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
SEA, you have captured a moment (or several) I have felt myself. Great poem. ......jo |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
I had to come back and read this again. I am saving it. Love it. |
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saved_by_grace Member
since 2005-01-08
Posts 332In the arms of God... |
Wow, SEA, every word of this was absolutely B E A UTIFUL!!! Loved it!!Hugs... ...Becka |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is absolutely beautiful. |
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