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Open Poetry #35

pain

Cloud 9
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since 2004-11-05

Posts 980
Ca

0 posted 2005-04-15 06:55 PM

I will wait for the butterfly to
kiss all the pain and anger away

But until then
I will wish it all away day by day.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2005-04-15 06:58 PM

pain is a good incentive to stay away from the one that hurt you....I hope you move past the pain, but don't forget it. I haven't forgotten mine.

Cloud 9
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since 2004-11-05

Posts 980
Ca

2 posted 2005-04-15 07:03 PM

Nope, I don't think I or anyone for that matter can forget the kind of pain. ***nodding*** Its a shame some men are like this.

Thanks for the support. You are appreciated.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2005-04-15 07:05 PM

the "like this" is a nice way of saying stupid eh?

yeah...I know

Cloud 9
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since 2004-11-05

Posts 980
Ca

4 posted 2005-04-15 07:10 PM

LOL!! *smiling* I am glad you understand.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2005-04-16 04:37 PM

good one
I can sure relate
but you knew that

yv
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since 2003-05-30

Posts 574

6 posted 2005-04-16 06:03 PM

Simple. Poetic. Touching. I felt all of every word of this poem. I really connected with this poem. Thank you.

Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2005-04-16 06:12 PM

Nice writing...James

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