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Foxyoasis
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0 posted 2005-04-15 05:39 PM



My life I walk alone
to the own beat of my
hearts drum

Bashing me into the grown.
the cold thankless grown
as stones piearce my skin
I still go on further digging
hopefully to find a star

Something to take comfort in me
to tell me it's okay sweep my hair
away from my face to dry my eyes

To shut up my mind make the thoughts
stop why can't I stop obessing over you
this isnt healthy thing to do

But to never see you is like never
to the see the sun for I'd be no more
without the warmth of your emrbace the
sparkle in your eyes.

The way you hold me tight at night and
how I feel alright inside.

How the sickness inside me fades away
whenever I'm around you. How can i deal
with that going away

How can you just walk away how

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


© Copyright 2005 Julie O'Neill - All Rights Reserved
DavePage
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1 posted 2005-04-15 05:44 PM


Spirit captured a heart
Life lost a heart

Abd the world deposited debt

Foxyoasis
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2 posted 2005-04-15 05:48 PM


*tears

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


passing shadows
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3 posted 2005-04-15 09:02 PM



ThUnDeRkYsS
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4 posted 2005-04-15 10:50 PM


This hits very close to home with me, stay strong and keep your chin up.  Very well expressed, like thoughts from my mind written on your page.  Thank you for sharing.

Brian

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.



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5 posted 2005-04-15 10:56 PM


Oh, but those typos "crappy:

Sometimes it's hard to read past them, to get into the meaning and flow of your thoughts. Even so, your pain and angst are evident.

SmartChick
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6 posted 2005-04-16 09:03 PM


Awwww! I remember this feeling all too well.
WindWalker
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7 posted 2005-04-17 12:14 PM


Yes your pain and angst are very evident in this poem.
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8 posted 2005-04-17 12:28 PM


good read
MGROVES
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9 posted 2005-04-17 06:20 PM



  I know the pain of this
    to well~
  one of my many scars
    a wound so deep
       feels like it shall
    never heal or fade away~
        hugs to you~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Foxyoasis
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10 posted 2005-04-17 11:35 PM


thank's guys

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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