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The Clutch of Driftwood
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The Clutch of Driftwood |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
The Clutch of Driftwood Despite its shape I am content with this the appearance of assortment. I need that, and in its deficit, complex and sinuous, want the windbreak. RMW |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
you always amaze me sir...with the absolute grace..that is present in your words... |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Thank you, Ron. You've been missed. Now to read your latest. Bob |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
outstanding!  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
E X C E L L E N T !! For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
OMG you even brought out the Cpat~~~~  nicely done, Bob--t MeMe (in a very good mood) |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes! Yes yes yes... this is what driftwood is... and what it isn't! Bravo, Robert! |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Bob...I agree with Ron...you have such a nack for saying it just right!  |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
~PERFECT~  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Dang, but this driftwood collector sure does FEEL this write. Enjoyed. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Hello Bob, how are you? Hope all is well. You say much with such concise word usage. I love the idea of driftwood as a metaphor. Perfect, somehow, or imperfect, as driftwood is. Corinne |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
Captivating. I enjoyed this poem. Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"I am content" yes, you know exactly how to say it. Despite what you may think, you have not been forsaken...life has just gotten so hectic..  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Corinne .... All is well. Thank you for asking. The same with you I hope? Bob Passing Shadows, Enchantress, M, Sunshine, Martie, Nightshade, yv, and Susan .... Thank you all very much for taking a moment to read and comment. I appreciate it. Bob |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
 Suffice it to say, your poem touched me. Love & Light, EA |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
a concise ulogy, painted on a canvas of precise words....wish so, I could borrow your brush...or get even close...wonderfully done! |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
EA ... How thoughtful, to go to the trouble of posting the art work. Thank you. Bob Lee ... Thank you for the kind words. Bob |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Yes, alive and kickin', Bob, thank you. A time of transition, but then, I guess that is the status quo. Thank you for asking!Corinne |
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