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Foxyoasis
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0 posted 2005-04-15 04:36 PM



Love what is it really
a chemical emotion willing
you to feel such feelings of
wonderful butterflies in your
stomach?

To put yourself first for
the one you care about?
to rather have pain inflict
upon your very soul then
to have him cry for one moument?

To back away when need even when
it's you that is hurting the most.

To push on one last time to let your
love know what is going on inside of
you

The wake inside the shakes you get
when around that certain person.
touching you makes me feel alive
and dead at the same time.

Does that
make sence? Is this love love ah
what a wonderful thing that can bring
you up to the clouds and have you crushed
in a mere instant of pure insanity

To not want to give up even if you think
it's the end to further endore this pain
this misery this hell if you will to try
to make yourself noticed and let it be known
how much is shown.

The words U read to you are from my soul
my heart to yours no matter what this is
for you my love I want to go and endore all
your pain please bestow it upon me for I am a rock
that may break in time but I always come back stronger
harder and longer and more presistant.

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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1 posted 2005-04-15 04:53 PM


you describe it well
Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla
2 posted 2005-04-15 05:03 PM


describe yes but why can't anyone else see this well guy's men grr

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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