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Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2005-04-15 04:28 PM

Over the tombs

Of once young lovers—

Two sparrows

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2005-04-15 04:31 PM

wow

enjoyed this, even though I have no idea what the title means

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

2 posted 2005-04-15 05:38 PM

Over the tombs

Of once young lovers—

Two sparrows

Thrown

Of lovers

Two spirits

ice
Member Elite

since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

3 posted 2005-04-15 11:27 PM

"Over the tombs

Of once young lovers—

Two sparrows"

"Thrown

Of lovers

Two spirits"

Alike

birds and lovers

find comfort

Over and under the tombs

I hope you don't mind me adding instead of a simple reply, John...

Your poetry is very inspiring...

Please let me know if this bothers you..

---------ice/ford
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Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

4 posted 2005-04-16 06:05 AM

Ice,

Not at all.  I like the idea of linked
verse.

My stuff tends or at least
aspires to noting significnace within
the common experience.  To the extent
it brings a sense, even more a response,
in sympathy it is gratified and grateful.

Thanks again.

John

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2005-04-16 12:06 PM

Much enjoyed the post John..
as well as the responses.

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

adagio
Member

since 2005-03-19

Posts 449
Marrero, La.

6 posted 2005-04-16 01:10 PM

enjoyed., adagio

yv
Senior Member

since 2003-05-30

Posts 574

7 posted 2005-04-16 06:37 PM

The more I read of your Excellence, the more I am hypnotized. Loved all over.

Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent.

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

8 posted 2007-04-30 07:50 PM

Ice,

Not at all.  I like the idea of linked
verse.

My stuff tends or at least
aspires to noting significnace within
the common experience.  To the extent
it brings a sense, even more a response,
in sympathy it is gratified and grateful.

Thanks again.

John
*********
I learnt

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