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Mögen sie darin Trost finden

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Huan Yi
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0 posted 04-15-2005 04:28 PM       View Profile for Huan Yi   Email Huan Yi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Huan Yi


Over the tombs

Of once young lovers—

Two sparrows
© Copyright 2005 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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wow

enjoyed this, even though I have no idea what the title means
DavePage
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Over the tombs

Of once young lovers—

Two sparrows


Thrown

Of lovers

Two spirits
ice
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3 posted 04-15-2005 11:27 PM       View Profile for ice   Email ice   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ice

"Over the tombs

Of once young lovers—

Two sparrows"


"Thrown

Of lovers

Two spirits"


Alike

birds and lovers

find comfort

Over and under the tombs


I hope you don't mind me adding instead of a simple reply, John...

Your poetry is very inspiring...

Please let me know if this bothers you..

---------ice/ford
   ><>
Huan Yi
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Ice,

Not at all.  I like the idea of linked
verse.  

My stuff tends or at least
aspires to noting significnace within
the common experience.  To the extent
it brings a sense, even more a response,
in sympathy it is gratified and grateful.

Thanks again.

John
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Much enjoyed the post John..
as well as the responses.

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

adagio
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enjoyed., adagio

yv
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The more I read of your Excellence, the more I am hypnotized.  Loved all over.

Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent.

Drauntz
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Ice,

Not at all.  I like the idea of linked
verse.  

My stuff tends or at least
aspires to noting significnace within
the common experience.  To the extent
it brings a sense, even more a response,
in sympathy it is gratified and grateful.

Thanks again.

John
*********
I learnt
 
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