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Foxyoasis
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0 posted 2005-04-15 04:20 PM


Furstation is what I see
in your eyes how they well up
in tears as you lay your eyes upon
my broken spirit. My clouded blood
shot windows

To comfort you is like a magnetic
effect I am drawn to it no matter
how much it may back fire. At the
same time there is this invisible
force that pushes me away from you
by your own doing.

Why can't I just hug you and kiss
you and tell you things will be ok
let it not be over let it go more
slower if you will for I rather have
that then risk losing you

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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passing shadows
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1 posted 2005-04-15 05:24 PM


this feeling...very familiar
Foxyoasis
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2 posted 2005-04-15 05:33 PM


ah if only the words i write could fully clense the sadness

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
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3 posted 2005-04-15 06:02 PM


The words demand to be written to but "yet not".

Dave

Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
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4 posted 2005-04-15 06:20 PM


yea

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


ThUnDeRkYsS
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since 1999-09-23
Posts 727
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5 posted 2005-04-15 10:55 PM


Very familiar indeed, I felt it with every line.

Brian

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.



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