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Foxyoasis
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0 posted 2005-04-15 03:31 PM



The  Soldier you claim to be
the person you hide from
you should just be you

you are a great person in
many of ways the blue soilder
is nice and kind yes but per
chance my dear that may be
the real you. don't fight it
nor hide it.

your demons they touture you
my poor sweet freind I care for
you and shall leave you alone
till then just remeber one thing
and this alone I shall always be
here for you no matter if the sun
no longer shines upon your face


even if the grey skies take a hold
of you and send you into a place of
pure misery I shall be your dark angel
of light to pull you out whenever you
need me.

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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DavePage
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1 posted 2005-04-15 03:37 PM


Words that matter

Dave

Foxyoasis
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2 posted 2005-04-15 03:38 PM


I am planning on sharing this with him today hopefully he hears my caring in my voice and comes over for just a mere 5mins.

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


passing shadows
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3 posted 2005-04-15 04:11 PM


good write, very touching

let me know how it goes

Foxyoasis
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4 posted 2005-04-15 04:14 PM


well hopefully he comes by later like he said he would try to.

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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