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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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would love it if poetry drips out like water from a tap in the middle of a magnificent thirst summer beckons and water flows in smoky circles of white clouds hard rock plays itself out from the radio as time stands stunned flow is the least i can ask for when the hills slant my way serenity from brightness shines ~ lines evenly lie on sand criss-crossing they sleep on the wake of my paths you might wonder what this thirst is that thrusts itself cruel the page is blank and it is white waiting to be plundered with thoughts of amaze yet all that it speaks are whispers of lucid silence amidst cries of absent groove while the groves of languid banyan sway with the merry wind ~ in the beginning just as in the end there is always nature yours, mine and of everything around us in surround-sound melodies from the whispering groves and then there is Nature. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sudhir I have felt this way too....lately I am parched. So, in trying to describe this feeling, you have written an excelent poem and one that I'm sure many poets can relate to. Thanks!  |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
your perception, my friend, Martie, is (add adjectives) ...  regards sudhir |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
random they may be, but inspiring |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
There is such a delicate flow to your words Sudhir. This is beautifully descriptive, smooth and flowing. You have a way of making me ponder, while artfully drawing pictures in my mind as I read. Yes sir, I enjoyed this. Best wishes, /Kit |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
First class and the sad thing Your words flow as magic and decorate the mind but maybe we have moved to a life where we don't try to remember Words Sublime dave |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
felt like i was sitting out at the beach and looking into the ocean and just drifting nice touch to this.... |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
thank you all so very much for coming by and leaving behind nice thoughts regards sudhir |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Sudhir it sure is nice to read your wonderful words again. I've had some time to spend in the blue pages the last couple of days. I can relate to this very well. Your words grace us so calmly and gently. Enjoyed!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." A. Brink |
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