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adagio
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since 2005-03-19
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Marrero, La.

0 posted 2005-04-15 01:22 PM



Golf is quite boring to watch on t.v.
make it a challange for you and for me
no more just standing in one little spot
trying and trying to size up the shot
make them all hit the ball while on the run
wouldn't that make the game so much more fun!


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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-04-15 01:30 PM


cute & commical poem, and almost the way I do feel about golf, unless, you were watching the Masters in Atlanta, which Wood's shot took him to his fourth Master's win, well, quit frankly, I've never seen or heard anything like it in my lifetime....


Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2005-04-15 01:58 PM


Very much enjoyed!
Gave me a much needed smile today.
Hugs~Nancy

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2005-04-15 04:27 PM


this is cute

I can just imagine that LOL

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

4 posted 2005-04-16 03:11 AM


grin...

I still say it's "polo". Or hockey. Soccer, maybe?

Anyway, I'm pleased, (very pleased) to see you finding your way around here.

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