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CastleGuard
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since 2003-04-30
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Alberta, Canada

0 posted 2005-04-15 12:45 PM



bared -
his firm desire
into velvet embrace
of her yearning -
she cried out
an ecstatic
“YES!!”

CG

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adagio
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since 2005-03-19
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Marrero, La.
1 posted 2005-04-15 01:25 PM


Well! For so few word it says so much!

     adagio


A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2005-04-15 02:16 PM


"YES!" !!!!!

~Thy Lady

"Let me not to the marriage of true minds
Admit impediments; love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2005-04-15 04:17 PM


wonderful
Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
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Atlantic Beach,Fla
4 posted 2005-04-15 05:11 PM


short but very good!

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917

5 posted 2005-04-15 05:16 PM


and can I undress first

Dave

TexUS
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Posts 228

6 posted 2005-04-16 12:09 PM


OH MY!

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