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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2005-04-15 05:04 AM


Perhaps Her Love
Is Always The Same

At times she seems to be
pushing me away. (so cold)
At times she seems to
pull me closer. (so sweet)
Perhaps in the thoughts
of her heart I am always
close to her and she is
always close to me.
Perhaps I am creating
the thoughts in my own
heart of being pulled
and pushed based on my
levels of confidence
or insecurity...

JamesLee
April15
2005

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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-04-15 08:28 AM


sounds to me, simply a case of her being in her own space...

love to you and she....
Happy Friday

DavePage
Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917

2 posted 2005-04-15 03:52 PM


Two is completely
Three a cloud for
We often strive as if there were five
For six
When all at sevens
We eight
never minding those
who said nine
but we for-ten

Sorry to have hijack your words
but I wrote four and
Sunshine's requirements are
10 per writing

Dave

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2005-04-15 04:02 PM


who knows anymore?

this reminds me of "are we really here or is it just a dream?"

love's too complicated

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