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Foxyoasis
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0 posted 2005-04-14 11:39 PM



I let you in my special place
how can you let go and let
it all go erased? I tried to
push you away you kept coming
at me anyway.

Now I'm hear broken hearted
my tears flood my room of hope
and faith it drowns in a deep
pool of sorrow. For I can't
stand the light of tommrow

another hurt another prick
why won't you just do it
hurt me deeply let the last
branch snap upon my head.

Please snap me in half and
undo my misery let it go
let it go away far away from
me.

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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with you
1 posted 2005-04-14 11:53 PM


You've got to give it time....I know that may seem like a cruel thing to say when you are hurting, but it is the truth. I'm glad that you are writing your feelings out, these last several posts from you have been so full of emotion, just utter heartbreak...
I wish you healing and peace.

Foxyoasis
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2 posted 2005-04-14 11:56 PM


time isnt a thing i have anymore i mean i do but im so sick of the constant crap
passing shadows
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3 posted 2005-04-15 02:10 AM


you are writing a lot of what I'm going through right now
Foxyoasis
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4 posted 2005-04-15 02:15 AM


it sucks don't it

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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