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Krawdad
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0 posted 2005-04-14 12:36 PM



"Sick with need of truth
But my garden calls to me
Singing songs of bloom

In clay-soil poverty
Panzies and Hellebores
"

- ice -
- - - - - - - - - -


A richness of blooms
all spent in the summer sun.
Flowers save nothing.

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inkedgoddess
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1 posted 2005-04-14 12:53 PM


A richness of blooms
all spent in the summer sun.
Flowers save nothing.

the flowers sing a lullaby to the sun
swaying beneath her, all in the moment

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2005-04-14 01:02 PM


Krawdad
Good one.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2005-04-14 01:10 PM


Excellent..enjoyed this one Kraw.
Hugs~Nancy

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2005-04-14 01:26 PM


get inspired more please?
nice to see you writing

ice
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5 posted 2005-04-15 06:21 AM


Sheesh! I almost missed this...

Krawdad....
This is a perfect twist on the subject.

All praise be to Basho.

---------ice
   ><>



LeeJ
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6 posted 2005-04-15 09:08 AM


enjoyed this....

Good good morning

Midnitesun
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Gaia
7 posted 2005-04-15 10:00 AM


nice inspire!

the seeds hold it all
releasing the gifts again

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