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Beki
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Newport Beach, CA, USA

0 posted 2005-04-14 03:05 AM



outside my door
amethyst chimes singing
in the ocean breeze

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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
1 posted 2005-04-14 02:07 PM


beautiful
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2005-04-14 02:23 PM


Lovely.

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

TexUS
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since 2003-03-20
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3 posted 2005-04-16 12:37 PM


Lovely little write...you took me there, and I felt the winds caress...
adagio
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since 2005-03-19
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Marrero, La.
4 posted 2005-04-16 12:49 PM


yery nice liked it


         adagio


Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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since 1999-08-26
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northern mountains, Idaho
5 posted 2005-04-16 03:24 PM


It must be a year since I have been here.

What a treat to find you, and this lovely haiku!

I can almost hear those chimes.  What's more, I can almost hear, smell and see the ocean I haven't seen for so many years.

Thank you!

The spiritual wind that holds survivors aloft, plants the seeds from which bloom new hope ... R.J.G.


Beki
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Newport Beach, CA, USA
6 posted 2005-04-17 12:29 PM


thank you new friends and old (hi Rosemary!) I appreciate all your comments very much..


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