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Professor Gloom
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of Depression

0 posted 2005-04-13 12:49 PM


A pair of sweet lovely ladies and me,
I in third best suit between the beauties;
Harbor walking in the dying of day,
To dine and talk and return the same way,
The sights were seen quickly in the passing,
Of ships, dragon paddles, song and dancing,
Walking by them all to the restaurant;
Of all the parts only the service was want,
The order was in disorder throughout,
Sequence is part of what dining's about,
Water, drinking water, where can it be?
Now where ever did that waitress flee?
But when all was finally said and done
The meal was good and the evening was fun.

Gloom


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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2005-04-13 01:06 PM


Excellent imagery here Gloom.
I hope the meal was satisfactory.
Hugs~Nancy

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2005-04-13 03:10 PM


I hope you didn't leave a tip

maybe the waitress would take the hint if she didn't get the money

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
3 posted 2005-04-13 06:35 PM


~smiling~ will come back to this later...
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
4 posted 2005-04-14 04:50 AM


LOL loved the title...and good to see you having fun!

~ARH

"Let me not to the marriage of true minds
Admit impediments; love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
5 posted 2005-04-14 11:41 AM



What a wonderful evening, though...
to be between two roses...

Enjoyed this, Professor...

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
6 posted 2005-04-14 03:36 PM



The three of us, we walked the pace
Across, around to bridge and lace
Familiar thoughts from words on blue.
Adding one to those of two.
The evening's breeze, the water's spray
Made for walking along the way.
Seafood tastes, a crab delight
Even though, and then in spite
Of order's dis and service poor
The meal was nice, the company more.
So what of that, the mood was light
Friendship shared in new this night.
To bind and blend the eastern coast
The three of us, in share...to toast.

And yes, the evening was fun for me
To meet, to learn and know, we three.

Thanks again to each
M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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