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Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2005-04-13 07:28 AM

Tomorrow

Its tomorrow I cannot wed
To me and now it figures dead
It’s now that I am born to see
It’s now that will and always be

Like horizons sight and sail
It’s in the wait like future mail
You must get past today to stay
It is the mainframe of today

Tomorrow is a hope a wish
A bittersweet upon a dish
The well we drink of fantasy
The cup that holds eternity

It is the essence of our wend
And the substance of our end
It is the paradox of core
It’s what we call the evermore

So take my hand before I die
And we will sing the song of sigh

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2005-04-13 07:46 AM

Like horizons sight and sail
It’s in the wait like future mail
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

that couplet is SOOOOO COOOOOL....
it makes me your poetic fool *L*

So take my hand before I die
And we will sing the song of sigh

*touching the screen* *S*
I always sing a song of SY.

*ww*

freewheelin
Member

since 2005-04-09

Posts 53

2 posted 2005-04-13 08:30 AM

Tomorrow is a hope a wish
A bittersweet upon a dish
The well we drink of fantasy
The cup that holds eternity

i cant agree more, the last couplet just finishes the bittersweet mood of the poem really well.

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

3 posted 2005-04-13 09:06 AM

Very profound and inspirational Sy. I enjoyed this well written poem.

believe in what your heart feels...

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2005-04-13 09:06 AM

Yes, truly a bittersweet write Sy...
But let's enjoy this glorious day, shall we?
~Smiles, Hugs & Tea, Nancy~

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

5 posted 2005-04-13 09:19 AM

Good write Seymour

bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2005-04-13 09:38 AM

JM,
Tell Randy to give you a

for me.
WW

freewheelin
Your comment a delight to read.

scorpio,
Thank you my friend.

Nancy,
Yes lets, you pour I'll drink. Hugs

bernie,
Thank you my friend.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

7 posted 2005-04-13 09:44 AM

Each day is a blessing - especially when it brings us your poetry. hugs, Chris

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

8 posted 2005-04-13 09:48 AM

Chris,
It's you that are the blessing.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2005-04-13 03:17 PM

awwww Sy...this is precious

CastleGuard
Senior Member

since 2003-04-30

Posts 760
Alberta, Canada

10 posted 2005-04-13 03:21 PM

Well done.

All there is now...sliding on the axis of time...

CG

Kristabell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-29

Posts 678
Portland, OR

11 posted 2005-04-13 05:07 PM

Truly beautiful and well said. Nice work!!!

Kristabell

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

12 posted 2005-04-13 05:49 PM

Good message here! Enjoyed!

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

13 posted 2005-04-13 09:08 PM

passing,
Glad you liked.

CastleGuard,
Thanks for the well done.

Kristabell,
Thank you.

Honeybunch,
Glad you enjoyed.

exhale
Senior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

14 posted 2005-04-14 01:13 AM

please know,
that i read almost everything you write on here,
but i can never think of what to say
without sounding like a foolish teenager.
your writting is beautiful
and it inspires me.

Tomorrow is a hope a wish
A bittersweet upon a dish
The well we drink of fantasy
The cup that holds eternity

my favorite.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

15 posted 2005-04-14 07:39 AM

exhale
Your comment was a delight to read.

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

16 posted 2005-04-18 04:13 AM

I look forword to each day to see
your words, feel your joy, knowing
i can always leave with  a smile
  and warmth in my heart~
  so

to you~
for all you do~
a

for you
and a

may your day be filled with joy

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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