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Open Poetry #35

Lock me up inside

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2005-04-12 09:41 PM

Wrapped inside my own cacoon of
love and posion. blood drips
off my finger tips as I dip it
into your wicked and wild ways.

Please slit me once again I beg you
I crave the pain of your love! Make
me happy and take it away like a child's
favorite toy!

Caress me and make me feel loved
tell me you adore me please don't shut
the door on me,lay me down inside the
covered box of broken dreams and cruel
intentions for that is where I see myself
all the time.

Please lock it this time so I can not
escape I no longer want my fate of suffering
for enternity any longer.

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

1 posted 2005-04-13 04:09 PM

Fairly graphic

I remember seeing a Japenese film, routed via South Korea to Manila

It sounds like this

Dave

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2005-04-13 04:13 PM

"the pain of your love"

yes, I know this well

Kristabell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-29

Posts 678
Portland, OR

3 posted 2005-04-13 05:04 PM

Fox,

Nice write. Very visual. Keep it up.

Kristabell

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

4 posted 2005-04-13 05:30 PM

thanks guy's

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

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