Suggestive Thirst - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

0 posted 2005-04-12 08:30 PM

Suggestive Thirst

When our souls hunger,
incertitude is not the seasoning,
which flavors this banquet.

Like nectarous release,
mouths skate o'er salted skin,
supping upon need,
delighting in feathered kisses,
for we’d crush want to lips as appetite swifts its’ way to our hearts,
and love's unsubtle rill immerses desires’ cloistered heart.

In fervent caresses time falls toward tresses sweetened by lavender,
and I sing with lips closed the impulsive aria that is eroticism,
in whom desire is impudent,
and pull from the quenchless essence of twilight's riches;
ardent moans.

That’s bliss.

Let there be sunsets,
when there's not anything but you and I,
plighted to pangs of urgency,
which have been immersed within suggestive thirst.

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

1 posted 2005-04-12 08:34 PM

ohhh my. my. my. mine.

::::scooping up all the words:::::

no. i don't wanna share. and you can't make me ***smile*** love and hugs.. me

~~~

can you tell, i like this one? :-)

"i close my eyes and gather up the puddle of this life, one teaspoon at a time, into a bucket with holes" ~me an excerpt from "she still sees ugly"

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2005-04-12 09:05 PM

Talk about wordsmithing....Wow....ya packed
a few into this one Kev....nicely done.

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

3 posted 2005-04-12 10:29 PM

Senual inviting sweet
beautiful.

Love this piece.

Hugs to you from me
;-)
Amour Vous,

Within this heart you'll find love

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2005-04-13 03:40 AM

nice one Kevin

freewheelin
Member

since 2005-04-09

Posts 53

5 posted 2005-04-13 11:04 AM

a nice and sensual poem, making feel a little bit edgy in one way or another.

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

6 posted 2005-04-14 04:41 AM

eroticism,....love that word...caught my attention...

enjoyed the whole piece!

~ARH

"Let me not to the marriage of true minds
Admit impediments; love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

7 posted 2005-04-15 11:40 PM

Needed to bump this up again.
Still sensual,inviting,sweet and beautiful
as the first dozen times I've reread this.

;-)

Hugs

Amour Vous,

Within this heart you'll find love

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

8 posted 2005-04-16 06:02 AM

enjoyed

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

9 posted 2005-04-18 10:43 PM

Kevin - you never disappoint me - I love falling into the heat of your words - you stoke the fires well - excellent my friend -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

10 posted 2005-04-18 11:15 PM

Your poetry stirs the blood and fires up the passions! Your words caress the page ~ and the reader!

Linda

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2005-04-19 12:37 PM

Nice writing...James

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.