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Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

0 posted 2005-04-12 06:02 PM

I wait.

As if you were the
sweep of time.

And eager for your caress...my moments
leaned in your direction.

Unconcerned where they
may fall.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2005-04-12 06:05 PM

very sensual

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2005-04-12 08:14 PM

oooh, very nice

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2005-04-12 09:33 PM

Superbly written...certainly not a surprise
of any sort. You have mastered the art of
precision poetry.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2005-04-13 08:25 AM

...my moments
leaned in your direction.

~*~

Pretty pretty pretty...

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2005-04-13 09:12 AM

B E A U T I F U L !!

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

6 posted 2005-04-14 04:52 AM

Loved every word....brilliant as usual!

~ARH

"Let me not to the marriage of true minds
Admit impediments; love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2005-04-14 10:32 AM

Wherever they fall your moments are captured and cherished.

the sweep of time simply exquisite!

I love you.
Margherita

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

8 posted 2005-04-14 03:21 PM

I wait.

As if you were the
sweep of time.

And eager for your caress...my moments
leaned in your direction.

Unconcerned where they
may fall.

As swirled as bliss that kissed moments

Unconcerned where they
may fall.

Couldn't resist it Eric

Dave

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

9 posted 2005-04-14 11:37 PM

you make me wonder how you do that so easily...wow, always so completely romantic...

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

10 posted 2005-04-15 02:23 AM

Another beautiful write in true Eric style!

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

11 posted 2005-04-15 11:41 AM

opps, she says as she falls into his waiting arms....beautifully written...

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