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Sadelite
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0 posted 2005-04-12 02:16 PM


       Curl waves of thick black
  trail clockwise the finger swirls
        in memories past

       softly tucked under pin
          tucked away softly  
             under pin

[This message has been edited by Sadelite (04-12-2005 03:50 PM).]

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1 posted 2005-04-12 02:24 PM


Such gentle, loving thoughts....it's good to see these today....

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2 posted 2005-04-12 02:44 PM


Rarely think about it anymore!  In my life, I've so much more now...  Yet, I don't think those memories ever become completely erased--but ALMOST, MOST of the TIME!

    Thanks, Rat L. for your sweet response.

   sadie

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3 posted 2005-04-12 03:05 PM


So very tender this is.  Nicely done Sadie.
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4 posted 2005-04-12 03:48 PM


Very nice. Much enjoyed. hugs, Chris

"The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze."
Gustavo Adolfo Becquer

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5 posted 2005-04-12 03:53 PM


Gentle Spirit,
   Tender were the times... Thanks for your sensitive comment.
         sadie

Nightshade,
    Thanks for stopping by again.  I'm glad you enjoyed.
         sadie
  

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6 posted 2005-04-12 05:35 PM


Sadie - just loved the feel of this - very touching...Paul
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7 posted 2005-04-12 05:37 PM


beautifully described
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8 posted 2005-04-12 06:11 PM


feeling this one as it wraps itself 'round the heart and mind
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9 posted 2005-04-12 09:56 PM


Goodknight,

   I'm glad this touched you.  I gave the few lines a lot of thought.  Thanks again, Sir Knight of Good.

          sadie

          ~~~~
passing shadows,

   funny the things one remembers...  glad you like the description

                sadie
                ~~~~~
  
Midnitesun,

   "feeling this one as it wraps itself 'round the heart and mind"   No greater compliment could I receive.  Thank you, Midnitesun.

               sadie

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10 posted 2005-04-13 09:46 AM


So tender and loving this is... beautiful!!!
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11 posted 2005-04-13 10:39 AM


Sade

I have a similar memory....thanks for bringing it to the surface.  

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12 posted 2005-04-13 10:43 AM


How loving..how beautiful.
this will stay with me all day...
thank you for sharing your thoughts.
Hugs~Nancy

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

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