Promises or Delivery? (part 2 of "A love note form God")

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Promises or Delivery? (part 2 of "A love note form God")

WindWalker
Senior Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 1218

0 posted 2005-04-11 03:38 PM

God promises, Satan delivers.

Ain't it the truth...

I got a strange letter in the mail today,
it said: Hi, I'm Satan. I'll be handling
all aspects of your life today.
I don't need your help – just have a good day.

Hmmm, I thought, pretty strange,
but then I went up town
and as I passed by an unsavory hotel,
a young woman came rushing out,
grabbed my hand, led me to her room
and we made love for two whole hours!

Damn, that was good!

Then as I passed a bank, a robbery was going on.
Two guys ran out waving guns
and people were screaming as the alarm went off.
As they got in their get-away car
one dropped a suitcase full of money –
I grabbed it and kept on going.

Yeah, that was pretty good too.

Then when I came home
my neighbour's wife came over to my place;
she tore her clothes off and said:
I've had the hots for you long enough:
take me! And I did. She's great!

You gotta admit, this guy delivers the goods!

Like he says:
if you gotta live in a screwed up world,
You may as well enjoy the best of it:
sex, money and sex.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2005-04-11 07:10 PM

Lost the rhythm of this one.
What happened to people taking responsibility?...going back to reread.
TD

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

2 posted 2005-04-13 05:00 PM

Taking the mickey is the best description but written in fun and fantasy

And most people dream of it and write about it

Dave

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