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Snow
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desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2005-04-11 03:02 PM



    

UsDreams

palm reading;
every scent filled line
remains yours
hours away
slip into our home until
we bleed the sunrise


©sdt'05
shadorma #2


"i close my eyes and gather up the puddle of this life, one teaspoon at a time, into a bucket with holes" ~me an excerpt from "she still sees ugly"

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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2005-04-11 03:10 PM


The graphics you use compliment your poetry, but still,
your poetry stands perfect without graphics.
Love your stuff Lady Snow.  Hugs.

I really want to care,
I want to feel something,
let me dig a little deeper
nah, still nothing~
my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee

Juju
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In your dreams
2 posted 2005-04-11 06:58 PM


Dang where you been? Gilr I swear Your never around.  Loved you poem

Love
JUJU

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

Snow
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desert flower looking for rain
3 posted 2005-04-12 02:02 AM


GS.... if it won't work without the art, then i'm not doing it right. so i thank you very much for what you said !!!

JUJU, i've been around .. sort of hon in and out. not writing too many new ones at the moment as i'm really focused on my book atm.... oh god, i said it outloud. lol. anyway... thank you so  much for reading.
snow

"i close my eyes and gather up the puddle of this life, one teaspoon at a time, into a bucket with holes" ~me an excerpt from "she still sees ugly"

Goldenrose
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4 posted 2005-04-12 04:36 AM


This was better than the first one for me ...thank you snow...always enjoy reading your wisdom..

Goldenrose.

Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.)

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5 posted 2005-06-14 09:00 PM


Right you are....publishing a poem with a picture gives a special responsibility -- to be sure both the poem and the picture can stand alone.....you do both, admirably.

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passing shadows
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6 posted 2005-06-14 10:07 PM


this...beautiful
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