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Open Poetry #35
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majnu
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0 posted 2005-04-11 12:21 PM

Downtown 1


soft seated pigeon
green light, cars growl and pass
start, pigeon in flight
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1 posted 2005-04-11 02:23 PM

soft seated pigeon
green light, cars growl and pass
start, pigeon in flight

flighted in seed
dawn breaks
day hastens

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2 posted 2005-04-11 02:45 PM

good one

looking forward to 2
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3 posted 2005-04-12 11:55 AM

very well done, am looking forward to the next one.
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