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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2005-04-11 10:37 AM



And When She Wakes

The sunshine peeks through slatted blinds.
While eyes deceive, the empty finds
A melody of thoughts before,
When darkness held the more of more.
The quiet peace, the pillows hold
Left imprints there, in satin fold.
To lift the head, to raise the day
In anchored thought of interplay.
So tossed the weight, in warmth to rise,
A smile to greet the lines of, traced.
In mirrored view those hazeled eyes
Serenity, this day embraced.
Studying of the face before.
Opening of the once closed door.
Allowing touch to heal the pain
Trusting in the feel again.
Forgotten dreams, tomorrow's here
When night returns and time is near.
In silence, words extend to you
Of when she wakes to thoughts of two...

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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bslicker
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state of mind
1 posted 2005-04-11 10:41 AM


the opening of the mind's doors.
good write M
Bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2005-04-11 10:44 AM


Thank you Bernie

The sun is shining and Spring is finally here ( although slightly chilly today)
hugs
M

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3 posted 2005-04-11 10:53 AM


yes, the sun is shining,  enjoy it M. Hugs.
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4 posted 2005-04-11 12:53 PM


M

You just keeping hitting new highs

This is brilliant

Dave

HopeS
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5 posted 2005-04-11 01:11 PM


Gave a wonderful sunshiny spring feeling

Hope

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displaced
6 posted 2005-04-11 01:38 PM


oh, a happy heart indeed

beautiful write

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7 posted 2005-04-11 01:45 PM


As fresh as a spring daisy! Flowers


Linda

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