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I sheep |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams 
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Free style... I can smell the must in the evening Even as the sun sets and the cool air comes through The stars are hidden the city knows them not And now as the city sleeps I can hear the night owls Calling to thier mates and carring on... looking for prey and searching for food. The night is full of secrets too many stories are coverd by the daily hastles The wolves are out again And yet the shepperds do nothing, but confort and silence the nervous sheep If it isn't the wolves its the merchants. How they sell the sheep and taking every thing And in this city every thing is obscure And as a child every part of me is used and as a student every moment I am afraid of Being forgoten among the sheep. -Juju Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (; [This message has been edited by Juju (04-11-2005 03:24 AM).] |
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longte Member
since 2005-04-06
Posts 199Australia |
It's a lot different to my "style" but very piercing in its portrayal Nicely done City life has a lot to answer for Live It |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Thank you for your reply. Forgive my delay. Collage is busy lol |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
It is very good and every country that tells you it is open is like the "Chairman of a team, supporting his Manager". Dave |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Thank you Dave Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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