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Casanova

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Huan Yi
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0 posted 04-18-2005 08:31 PM       View Profile for Huan Yi   Email Huan Yi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Huan Yi


She’s waiting

She’s waiting for you
To pretend it matters

That the sky
Was never so blue

The room is dark
Its curtains are drawn

Somewhere outside
An invisible dog
Barks in a neighbor’s yard

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1 posted 04-18-2005 08:45 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

"She’s waiting for you
To pretend it matters"

most of us are....

Huan Yi
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2 posted 04-18-2005 08:52 PM       View Profile for Huan Yi   Email Huan Yi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Huan Yi

Sea,

Whatever its merits,
my things, if at all,
draw response
from a varied audience.

Thank you for reading . . .

John
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3 posted 04-18-2005 09:19 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

good one
WindWalker
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4 posted 04-20-2005 10:44 AM       View Profile for WindWalker   Email WindWalker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for WindWalker

This is a good one; I like the use of imagery in the poem!
LeeJ
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5 posted 04-20-2005 11:21 AM       View Profile for LeeJ   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LeeJ

She’s waiting for you
To pretend it matters

God, that bites down hard and shakes
I never thought of it like that before?

I'd rather hurt a thousand times, then have someone pretend...that would be an amputation of the heart....mind and soul


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6 posted 04-30-2007 07:38 PM       View Profile for Drauntz   Email Drauntz   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Drauntz

good play!!! but sad audience.

enjoyed
 
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