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DavePage
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0 posted 2005-04-10 11:52 AM


Reply to comments from Sea, Goldenrose and Hakdthoughts

It is just on a theme and could have been written as a future "Lady in Red" song.

Dave

Posessed owning in body gesture and language broken by spirit as a bird of prey and of pray as the titbits thrown to anguish merge with fragments of frustraton unleased for image and in-mate desire

A surfeit of cadaver reducing the witness to a rook to enjoy yet another death of emotion presented for desert amongst a battlefield of those who fear running more than staying



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1 posted 2005-04-10 05:19 PM


"amongst a battlefield of those who fear running more than staying"

I would rather stand my ground any day...

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2 posted 2005-04-11 01:12 PM


I'll write something nicer

Dave

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