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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2005-04-09 08:01 PM

Morning trembles rain a kiss
Wakened in its transient bliss
Drenched a petals skin lilac
Left gleaming seeming sweet shellac
As senses bloom the half lit room

Where turning at your side is soft
Warmth outstretched in dreams aloft
To gently stir as hands occur
To travel knowing realms in glide
In clouds and signals multiplied

In lingered dew the air of you
A morning teased of such to do
Seductions fall so long and slender
Take and give return to sender
The sound of rain falls down again

Then dew together bloom as this
Morning trembles rain a kiss

Copyright Kkh 04/09/05

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2005-04-09 08:08 PM

So softly sensual and tender as a lingering
kiss of moistenend lips. Done quite nicely
dear TD...

Sun of faith
Member

since 2003-01-31

Posts 101

2 posted 2005-04-09 08:09 PM

Beautiful, gave me a warm feeling of happiness. great right. And thankyou for your support on my previous pieces.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

3 posted 2005-04-09 09:56 PM

Very beautiful writing, Kathleen.

...jo

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

4 posted 2005-04-10 02:16 AM

bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

freewheelin
Member

since 2005-04-09

Posts 53

5 posted 2005-04-10 06:30 AM

really beautiful, you conveyed it really well. wow.

longte
Member

since 2005-04-06

Posts 199
Australia

6 posted 2005-04-10 06:51 AM

Very Nice
Almost Sensual

Live It

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

7 posted 2005-04-10 08:06 AM

Then dew together bloom as this
Morning trembles rain a kiss
*************************************

misty, very misty
can feel the freshness long after

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

8 posted 2005-04-10 08:27 AM

ThisDiamond
A soft and lovely.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

9 posted 2005-04-10 10:40 AM

KathleenKathleen~
Melodic are these phrases ... so softly sung~
BEAUTIFUL dearest poetess~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

10 posted 2005-04-10 10:46 AM

TD, I sighed throughout the poem as I read your softly sensual mots of loving. A beautiful piece of writing.

EA

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

11 posted 2005-04-11 02:33 PM

beautiful for sure
as always

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