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Foxyoasis
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0 posted 2005-04-09 07:28 PM



the crimson red in your veins
as it pumps slowly into my skin
I can feel it pentrate my soul

I say do me again let me feel your
spirit and feed your soul let me
free you from your mind and let
me set you free to another world
where its you and me

I just can't look into the eyes
of the beholder for the mirror
is my sworn enemy juding me
forever and a day.

when im with you I feel whole
like nothing else matters the
butterflies captivate my body
and my mind and my heart as it
beats souly for your touch

oh the touch of your hand to
press upon my skin is like heaven
on earth as the angels sing sweetly
into my ear

invade me again love purge this
kiss as we are in sin let me have it


unedited

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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1 posted 2005-04-09 07:36 PM


powerful piece

I like this

Foxyoasis
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Atlantic Beach,Fla
2 posted 2005-04-09 07:39 PM


thank you

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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