If you make a woman cry, feel her tears

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Open Poetry #35

If you make a woman cry, feel her tears

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2005-04-09 01:51 PM

Released as the clouds collapse,
they attach to the rainflight
and take off on the crosswinds,

tally these tears tonight
and shed their offerings
upon the hollow hearted
where flowers have yet to sow,

and show him my eyes
thru his mirrored reflection,
as he'll inherit this tearfall
from the woman who cries.

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (04-10-2005 09:24 PM).]

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2005-04-09 02:09 PM

Long on such tender emotion...nicely done.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2005-04-09 04:27 PM

I love this inky

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2005-04-09 04:58 PM

"and show him my eyes
in its mirror reflected,

and inherit the tearfall
from the woman who cries."

Yes...love this ache.
Hugs pretty lady~

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2005-04-09 06:21 PM

Nice...sad that those who we trust to care, don't always care to share our tears...James

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

5 posted 2005-04-10 09:21 PM

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